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new day
the sunset highlights
a speck on the horizon
the future is near

alone
loudly the wind wails
i stand in the storm's center
hands and heart empty

she
hair lit by sunlight
soft waves of obsidian
my hands long to touch

indecision
one step to the cliff
pounding surf so far below
the edge of the world
©2008-2009 ~andromydah
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Author's Comments

Loosely inspired by Mishima's "The Sound of Waves" [link] , which I read for a college upper division Great Books class. We had to write haiku on the spot in class, which scared me because I don't really operate like that, but I still came up with a few I liked. (I was too shy to share them though, heh.)

Even though I did this for school, I had to post it because I haven't posted anything else in ages. Life has been pretty crazy, plus my camera has been out of commission. Speaking of, it looks like my camera's memory card is gone for good... and I don't have the money right this second to get another one... so I'm holding out hope it'll turn up eventually. =P

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:iconelle-sophocles:
this is beautiful! I love the imagery of nature and sun and other such macrocosmic things.

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Jennaichu used APATHY ATTACK!
... but nothing happened.

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