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the little bits of
cut paper scraps
flutter to the floor
like tiny bats
a few pieces alight
on my sticky fingers
and i wish
that you could stick
to me as easily
and i wonder
if you love me as much as
the stars in the sky
the baby bat bits on my floor
©2008-2009 ~andromydah
:iconandromydah:

Author's Comments

Just a silly, off-the-cuff poem. I feel like a dork putting this in 'romantic', but I guess it is, kinda--in the way that everything reminds you of that person when you're in love... even making a mess with construction paper.

Ever since we read T.S. Eliot's "The Waste Land" in my British Modernism class, I've had the line "bats with baby faces in the violet light" (line 380, in case you want to look it up!) 'stuck' in my head... so I think that's what inspired the whole bat thing, though this is not at all a modernist poem. =P

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